Joseph Longhany commented on He Was Perfectly Broken – “Fifty Shades Darker” Trailer Reflection
He was the good, the bad, and the scary. Pressing for perfection in an imperfectly twisted individual, will send him into …
The collective ‘we’ voice is a brilliant touch in the opening- it adds depth to the reflection, playing as different identities emerging and layering complexity. And the identity of the guy that that emerges is on point.
I love the line- “I hope that every letter and every phrase I read will come to life in my mind.”
You write beautifully, and I could read your stuff all day!
